I recently completed a rough draft a class essay. It was read in front of the class along with the mistakes I've made. I noticed alot of problems with my essay and problems that i could've easily made just like everyone else. One mistake i made was spelling, I need to remember to go back and check my spelling readers will read my paper and not understand it due to bad spelling. Another problem about my essay was that i didn't proofread my paper before I turn it in. Doing this, I can spot my mistakes. To be safe and to have a full edited paper, I'll let a friend proofread my paper.

Introduction

My name is Doryan Williams and I attend BC Rain high school. I was born and raised in Mobile, Alabama. I live with my mom, brother, sister, and niece. I love my family, but we disagree a lot. I stay isolated in my room most of the time to avoid with them. Things I like to do is play video games and text. My exceptions for this school year are to take advantage of the opportunities around my school, bring positive vibes around people, and set an example for the lower grade level. I want to pursue my dream to become a Freemason after I get a major in either psychology or the audio/video production.